Pitch reflection

 1) With the questions that the audience asked me, one of the most common ones were "How would you get children to act on your TV advert" and I thought I could get my nieces and nephews, but they probably wouldn't know what to do or even want to do it. So, I am going to make my friends do the TV advert and change the target audience to teenagers because if I am not going to be being children in my TV advert it wouldn't be targeted to them. 

2) Another thing that I need to improve of is the slogan. My original slogan was "unwrap it, eat it, bin it" but with mini eggs you don't unwrap it because it comes in a packet. I changed it to " A moment of delight" which I like more than the one I originally went for. 

3) When I presented my presentation, I didn't look at the audience, which is something that I need to improve on because if I'm trying to present my campaign to the audience, I will also need to have my attention to them. I was either looking at the screen or putting my head down which would make the audience uninterested in my presentation.

4) Next time I would need to make my presentation more interesting because I sounded a bit boring. I was nervous since it was my first presentation that I've done in a while. To do that I would need to have memorised key information that was in my PowerPoint and make it more amusing towards the audience.

5) I was a bit quiet when I was presenting my PowerPoint because I was nervous, but I would need to raise my voice a bit so that the audience can clearly understand what I'm saying.

6) I would need to make my ideas more detailed so that the audience could understand where I am coming from because the audience were a little confused on what was going to happen in my TV advert. I would need to make it clear on what's happening in the TV advert, who is going to be in my TV advert and how it is going to be unique from all the other TV adverts that are also advertising mini eggs.

7) My PowerPoint doesn't have a lot of writing as a whole but there were some slides that have a lot of writing so, I would need to only include the important and main facts that I need and erase anything that bit be irrelevant to the slide or having a little bit of too much information.