Audience Feedback

 Audience feedback questions.

Did you understand the concept of the advert?

Is it entertaining?

If the advert isn't entertaining, why?

Is there anything to add into the advert? 

What did you think about the characters in the advert?

Afsarah said that she did understand the concept but with that we make it a bit more clear because the advert that I created was okay but there was a lot of parts where we would be talking when it doesn't relate to the advert, so she was confused if it was a part of the advert or wasn't. To fix that I'm going to edit out the part that we don't need for e.g, parts where I would talk over the actors or when the actors bring character. To make sure that the audience watching the final product would get confused on if that's part of the advert or not. She also said that the characters in this advert did a good job so I don't need to worry about changing them.

Zayna said that she could understand the advert because its just people running to get chocolate. She said it would be entertaining if the clips were a bit shorter because it's too long for an advert. When I edit my advert i will have to make sure it is shorter because in the brief it says that it has to be around 30 seconds. Zayna also said how we should add some joyful or cheery music in the background, just to make it more entertaining and better to watch.

Pravini said the same thing about how we should make the clips shorter. She also said that they was clips where Simona and Reemu would be in the frame when they shouldn't be, so i'll have to go through the clips and take out shots that have the characters in frame when they aren't supposed to be. She stated that there were some clips that she liked and some that she didn't. Since i am going to make the advert shorter i will take out any of the shots that i don't like.