Audience Feedback

 Audience feedback questions.

Did you understand the concept of the advert?

Is it entertaining?

If the advert isn't entertaining, why?

Is there anything to add into the advert? 

What did you think about the characters in the advert?

Afsarah said that she did understand the concept but with that we make it a bit more clear because the advert that I created was okay but there was a lot of parts where we would be talking when it doesn't relate to the advert, so she was confused if it was a part of the advert or wasn't. To fix that I'm going to edit out the part that we don't need for e.g, parts where I would talk over the actors or when the actors bring character. To make sure that the audience watching the final product would get confused on if that's part of the advert or not. She also said that the characters in this advert did a good job so I don't need to worry about changing them.

Zayna said that she could understand the advert because its just people running to get chocolate. She said it would be entertaining if the clips were a bit shorter because it's too long for an advert. When I edit my advert i will have to make sure it is shorter because in the brief it says that it has to be around 30 seconds. Zayna also said how we should add some joyful or cheery music in the background, just to make it more entertaining and better to watch.

Pravini said the same thing about how we should make the clips shorter. She also said that they was clips where Simona and Reemu would be in the frame when they shouldn't be, so i'll have to go through the clips and take out shots that have the characters in frame when they aren't supposed to be. She stated that there were some clips that she liked and some that she didn't. Since i am going to make the advert shorter i will take out any of the shots that i don't like.

Mini eggs final advert

Risk assessment

Recce

Mini eggs rough draft advert

 

Shooting Script

 

Flat Plan

 

Mini eggs print advert final draft

 

Proposal

Pitch reflection

 1) With the questions that the audience asked me, one of the most common ones were "How would you get children to act on your TV advert" and I thought I could get my nieces and nephews, but they probably wouldn't know what to do or even want to do it. So, I am going to make my friends do the TV advert and change the target audience to teenagers because if I am not going to be being children in my TV advert it wouldn't be targeted to them. 

2) Another thing that I need to improve of is the slogan. My original slogan was "unwrap it, eat it, bin it" but with mini eggs you don't unwrap it because it comes in a packet. I changed it to " A moment of delight" which I like more than the one I originally went for. 

3) When I presented my presentation, I didn't look at the audience, which is something that I need to improve on because if I'm trying to present my campaign to the audience, I will also need to have my attention to them. I was either looking at the screen or putting my head down which would make the audience uninterested in my presentation.

4) Next time I would need to make my presentation more interesting because I sounded a bit boring. I was nervous since it was my first presentation that I've done in a while. To do that I would need to have memorised key information that was in my PowerPoint and make it more amusing towards the audience.

5) I was a bit quiet when I was presenting my PowerPoint because I was nervous, but I would need to raise my voice a bit so that the audience can clearly understand what I'm saying.

6) I would need to make my ideas more detailed so that the audience could understand where I am coming from because the audience were a little confused on what was going to happen in my TV advert. I would need to make it clear on what's happening in the TV advert, who is going to be in my TV advert and how it is going to be unique from all the other TV adverts that are also advertising mini eggs.

7) My PowerPoint doesn't have a lot of writing as a whole but there were some slides that have a lot of writing so, I would need to only include the important and main facts that I need and erase anything that bit be irrelevant to the slide or having a little bit of too much information.

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